Friday, March 18, 2005

of shooting 13 times

so i promised myself
i am off stuff
i am off it all
i need to stop
i need to regulate
before i do fall

quite fine i was
yes i say fine
i did stay off all
like the plan of mine
i kept away, far
and did ... stand tall

a sudden thought
'ah who am i kiddin!'
whats there to lose
... serious... i'd say
whats the need
for the this recluse

finally yes finally
'twas that friday night
i did ... venture ahead
o fools what did you think
i had something to prove?
haha just 'twas emotions withheld

back i am i exlcaim
back i am i also claim
now should i dance n jump?
am i to celebrate
am i to speculate
but for sure this IS my trump!

10 Comments:

At 8:21 PM, Blogger Jax said...

wow!! lets drink to that!! :D

 
At 9:09 PM, Blogger Sue said...

hehehe sure!
had like 10 shots of tequila and 3 vodka...
hahaha is that a back with a bang or what!

 
At 1:49 AM, Blogger amrita said...

Dear Sunaina,
I would like to congratulate you on behalf of all the drunkards in the world and all the Liquor corporations.Finally,this sector can look forward to a boom.For a long time we were in a depression incurring huge amount of losses on account of your decision.Now,we are certain to reach the peak of our business very soon.
Cheers!,
Truly Yours,
The relieved liquor barons.

 
At 2:26 AM, Blogger Akshay said...

Su

Firstly nice poem considering u were drunk when you wrote it.

Then i have a doubt: 3rd stanza last line, why is it

for the this recluse : Is it intentional or hangover effect.

10x + 3y and still ur head is up and running showz ur capability.

Amen!

 
At 4:22 AM, Blogger Karthik/SK/wimpy/SKimpy said...

hey, didn't know you blog... and i stumbled upon this from, of all places, baada's defunct blog!

anyways, nice poetry!

and you can see my blog here

SK

PS: my blog on blogger is defunct... i prefer LJ due to the "friends view"...

 
At 10:58 PM, Blogger Sue said...

hey sk! nice to catch u here :)
hmm i shall note you blog and link it in mine
will keep droppin in there...
baada is who btw?

 
At 10:59 PM, Blogger Sue said...

and @ ammo... yes thankoo thankoo my humanitarian side to the liquor barons is ever magnanimous...
heheh aks... yes you'd be surprised at my capacity :P

 
At 1:43 AM, Blogger Karthik/SK/wimpy/SKimpy said...

baada is kesavan... classmate of mine both at IITM and IIMB...

wondering how you know him...

well... both of you are iyengars i think... are you cousins or something?

 
At 3:32 AM, Blogger Sue said...

ooohhh ok
seven eh... ah orkut world is small... ye both of us are iyengars... hehe...

hows u been doing? man been a long time! we guys should meet up ... sharadha anuroop et al what say?

 
At 2:23 AM, Blogger Karthik/SK/wimpy/SKimpy said...

life goes on... lots of project work and stuff... slightly busy...
finishing my third term next week... after which i'm off to London to intern with JP Morgan Securities.

i don't think i can catch up with you ppl till mid-june. we'll meet after that.

(first time in my life i'm making long-term plans i think... )

 

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