Thursday, April 13, 2006

light

jaded i stood
faded in the darkness
waded then did i
serenaded by emotions
traded with an antidepressant
.... and then i saw light

8 Comments:

At 7:33 AM, Blogger Naina said...

Do they have a name for this rhyming(???) scheme???

 
At 12:59 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Is the real poetry or what??

 
At 6:14 AM, Blogger Jammy said...

Same question as naina

 
At 5:06 AM, Blogger Michael Andrews said...

Thats cool.. y dont u write more!

 
At 6:14 PM, Blogger liQuiD hERoin said...

Good stuff.

 
At 6:55 AM, Blogger Ujj said...

got lost..
stoppped by..
read..
movin on..

 
At 7:18 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

What? Are you still depressed or are you writing about a baby's voyage out into the world? Nice.

 
At 10:52 AM, Blogger Daysleeper said...

wow! nice:) when all else fails, try prozac? ;)

 

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